SHOT LIST
- Sky shot that pans onto the town with tumbleweed rolling through
- Hooves on the ground (only two horses, Tommy and Verne share a horse)
- Town vista with signage, some wanted posters on the sign that are torn and not 100% legible. The two horse and three main characters come into shot.
- When they get into town they stop by the water vat.
- Close up of the water in the vat that shows the father’s horse bending down to drink the water water ripples.
- Father splashes face with water from a flask that is empty.
- Tommy and verne get of the horse and verne washes his face whilst tommy stretches, this pans out to a group shot that holds one them then it fades to black. - Timing wise 30 seconds
- Enter a room with curtains waving and silhouetted figure stood behind a long barrelled gun, the man is finishing a cigarette.
fades to black. - Timing wise 20 seconds
9. Shot of roy looking down barrel of shotgun.
10. From the perspective of that window, barrel of the gun pointing down at the father at the water vat. - Timing wise 10 seconds
fades to black - gun shot.
11. Swirling camera pan of the horse bucking and the father falling off the horse starts fast but goes into slow motion as he falls off ends on a hold of the father bleeding on the ground.
12. Tommy running over bending down line goes “Pa no! Don’t Die!
Cuts to black begin title sequence.
Cuts to black begin title sequence.
13. Verne swinging his arm up as he says this ain’t right he didn’t deserve this blahblah
14.Close up of tommy with his hand on his face zooms out to the next shot
15. Tommy above father clutching shoulders verne above Tommy, on vernes line he puts his hand on his shoulder
16. Zooms into Verne’s face / cuts to / help me get pa onto the back of the horse we’ve got to see the undertaker
17. The sun sets, silhouetted figures of Tommy and Verne put the dad’s body on the back of the horse.
18. Tommy leads the horse with the dad’s body on top, verne following playing a sorrowful tune on the harmonica they walk out of town to the graveyard.
19. Orange sky more pink ex. Graveyard pan across
20.graveyard from a different angle with verne playing harmonica while it pans round as tommy is digging.
21.cuts to verne pausing and the two of them throwing handfuls of soil on the grave
22. Close up of the soil landing on the coffin
23. Verne etches a cross with a piece of flint and tommy covers it with soil, Sheriff walks in says first half of line.
24. Cuts to sheriff’s face, when he says his name is roy foreman he’s wanted for …
25. Cut’s to just tommy and sheriff as the sheriff hands tommy a wanted poster and Tommy says I heard he’s a lean mean killing machine.
26. Cuts to midshot of verne as he fists one hand onto the other and says i’ll pay for the day he gets up in my grill.
27 back to sheriff for “he’s a dangerous man. Nawh I don’t know what your pa did t’ upset this fella, but you better be careful round the town,”
28. Shot of tommy showing verne the poster as sheriff continues and then tommy says he must of known something about the train robbery.
29. Cuts back to sheriff: probably kiddo… waggles finger when he says you better keep your wits about you.
30. Long shot of the silhouetted characters and the sheriff leaves the scene verne plays the harmonica fades/cuts to black harmonica continues but gets quieter as we move into the distance and digging noises and clanging of coins starts.
31. Fat sam buries money in a grave on the other side of the graveyard Medium shot.
32. Long shot of the graveyard fat sam scurries out and verne taps tommy they stop and watch and follow him back to town.
Black.
33. Tommy and Verne tie up horses camera moves round to reveal
34. Friday stood outside the saloon
35. Close up of friday for dialogue “Howdy Fellas what you boys saying’”
36.cuts to tommy with verne with horse in background
37. Group shot as friday moves tommy away from the saloon door
38. Cuts back to friday with maybe i can
39. On “maybe I can’t” reaction shot of tommy and verne.
40. Group shot as she finishes her dialogue and tommy tips his hat as she goes inside.
41. Verne Shuffling around moving towards horses as he says I don’t think she knows anything buddy, holds on him as tommy starts with not so fast buddy, Tommy puts his arm on verne as the back of him comes into shot.
42. Cuts to a shot of tommy getting a dollar out of his pocket as he says he’s willing to bet his bottom dollar..
43. Possible cut it shot of a close up of the hand with the coin before flicking it depending on timing of the line will still draw.
44. He smiles cannily at verne before thumbing to the door.
45. Shot of Verne rolling his eyes and shaking his head walking toward the saloon door.
Fades to black.
46. Shot of a piano being played honky tonk saloon esque music.
47. Girls legs can can on stage
48. Close up of glasses clunking together on a table // 49. or could have drink sliding down bar top.
50. Man asleep in the corner
51. Honky tonk music ends and the girls go down the steps at the side of the stage and join the piano man
52. Poker Shot, wide shot of saloon door in background
53. Hand on saloon door swinging open - silence
54. Boots and spurs on wooden floor.
55. Pan round the interior of the bar ends on the bar tender what you fellas drinking, some background noise re begins but is very tense.
56. Tommy points at beers makes two sign
57. Close up of two pints being poured roy foreman is behind the two boys shiftily comes out the shadows of the back of the bar and pulls his guns out
58. Close up of his face as he says time for you little bitches to meet your pop.
59. From behind roy camera of tommy and verne jokingly knocking knees.
60. Shot of Roy foreman has he tries the guns but realises he has no ammo in them.
61. Close up of tommy and vernes faces with blue sunglasses on like the rock doing the people’s eyebrow, verne fist pumps other hand, tommy crosses arms.. BarTender in background mic drop from ceiling. // If this doesn’t work try it with his own shot.
62. Shot of bartender climbing onto the bit behind the bar not quite on the bar top stood doing the start of his announcement grabs hold of mic and swings around raucously.
63. One of the poker players over at the bar, takes a sip, smashes a drink into his forehead, and sprays it everywhere.
64. Back to close up of Bartender as he continues introducing the deadly brothers.
65. Roy Foreman closeup angry face.
66. Tommy and Verne shot revelling in their introduction.
67. Back to barman as he begins Roy’s introduction
68. Medium shot of Roy
69. Shot of Verne and tommy setting up a table.
70. Shot of Roy getting in a wrestling stance on Roy the Bullet forman.
71. Shot looking up at Tommy on the table as he says it doesn’t matter what your name is!!! He points at roy.
72. Piano man rings bells on his piano
73. Shot of Roy and Fat Sam as fat sam tries to creep to the exit and get away
74. Shot of Tommy jumping off the table leading into
75. Shot of Tommy and Verne doing dudley brothers 3D Smash on Roy
76. Shot of Roy on floor rolling through table debris
77. Friday cheering for tommy with whiskey drinkers and saloon girls
78. Sam stood next to Roy looks towards to door then down at roy and back to door
79. Close up of sam helping roy up
80. Shot of verne or filler or something
81. Then shot of sam creeping back to door as roy lurches at verne at which point
82. Moonsault shot rotoscoped off Seth Rollins video
83. Roy laying on floor, sam in background sneaking off.
84. Tommy and Verne Hi-Five
85. Sheriff walks in
86. Shot of Man asleep in corner waking up oblivious to everything that’s just occurred
87. Shot looking up at Sheriff from Roy’s perspective as he says Looks like you’re not getting the train back to santa styles as he chuckles does a little dance.
88. Shot of bartenders wiping down bar top.
89. Shot of Whiskey drinkers and sheriff taking Roy out of the saloon to jail.
Cut to Black
90. Tommy verne and Friday ride off into the sunrise credits roll.
End of Credits scene:
91. Roy sat in jail cell
92. Sheriff with feet up on desk snoring empty bottle of whiskey next to him, door creaks open and footsteps on wooden floor.
93. Shot of a chubby hand taking the keys from the sheriff
94. Roy stand up in jails cell and walks towards the door footsteps again
95. Hand Turning key in jail cell. Fades to black.
To be continued.
96. Final shot: Roy Foreman stood over Fat Sam as they dig up the gold from the graveyard.
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