Sky shot that pans onto the town with tumbleweed rolling through
Hooves on the ground (only two horses, Tommy and Verne share a horse)
Town vista with signage, some wanted posters on the sign that are torn and not 100% legible. The two horse and three main characters come into shot.
Close up of the water in the vat that shows the father’s horse bending down to drink the water water ripples.
Father splashes face with water from a flask.
Tommy and verne get of the horse and verne washes his face whilst tommy stretches, this pans out to a group shot that holds one them then it fades to black.
Enter a room with curtains waving and silhouetted figure stood behind a long barrelled gun, the man is finishing a cigarette. NB need to insert gun into this shot, just going to have it resting against his seat.
Shot of roy looking down barrel of rifle.
Chose not to include shot ten, just because the perspective was confusing my little head and also i attempted it and apparently I wasn't very good at drawing the barrel of a gun.
11. Swirling camera pan of the horse bucking and the father falling off the horse starts fast but goes into slow motion as he falls off ends on a hold of the father bleeding on the ground.
I've changed this to have interspersed cut shots from different angles of the dad falling off the horse.
Bullet hitting dad. This might come before the previous shot and then in the previous shot have the bullet hitting him, still undecided.
Shot two of the dad falling off the horse.
12.5 - Shot of Sheriff watching scene play out.
Shot three of the dad falling off the horse.
12. Tommy running over
Tommy bending down line goes “Pa no! Don’t Die!
13. Verne swinging his arm up as he says this ain’t right he didn’t deserve this blahblah
14.Close up of tommy with his hand on his face
15. Tommy above father clutching shoulders verne above Tommy, on vernes line he puts his hand on his shoulder
16. Zooms into Verne’s face / cuts to / help me get pa onto the back of the horse we’ve got to see the undertaker
17. The sun sets, silhouetted figures of Tommy and Verne put the dad’s body on the back of the horse.
Walking off to graveyard whilst sun begins to set won't look so visually different in the animation, if so will remove.
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